Marisol Torres                                    9/15/04                                                                        

Rev9sion Check List!

 

Ø  Identify your thesis sentence

ü                                Offer a one-sentence explanation or summary of what the paper is about.

Ø              Is the thesis supported in the body of the paper?

Ø              Clear purpose for the paper

ü                                            What is it intended to do or accomplish

Ø              Topic sentences

ü  Does it relate to your thesis?

Ø              Avoid

ü  “There is” or “there are” sentences.

Ø              Check 4 . . .

ü  Proper grammar & Proper punctuations.

ü  Pronoun-antecedent agreement

ü  Subject-verb agreement

ü  Sentence fragments/run-ons

Ø              Is your paper interesting?

Ø              Read your paper out loud

ü  Go back and look at each sentence

Ø              Check to be sure that you have No Fragments.

Ø              Are there places where

ü  More details, examples, or specifics are needed

Ø  Is there a clear intro, body, and conclusion.

Ø  Word choice

·      Clear

·      Effective

·      Concise

Ø  Do any paragraphs seem much shorter and in need of more material than others?